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Dismantled Men, Eighteen: Granados

  Jac woke to soft warmth and the steady rise of Melody’s breath against her neck. Morning light slipped between the blinds in pale ribbons, laying quiet strokes of gold across the blankets. For a moment — a brief, delicate one — the world was still. No screaming sirens, crime scene tape. No captains barking orders or reporters shoving cameras in her face. Just heat, the faint scent of potpourri from Melody’s kitchen, and the weight of an arm curled loosely around her waist.

  She turned her head just enough to see Melody sleeping, hair mussed, lips slightly parted, one cheek pressed into the pillow. Jac felt something shift inside her — a slow, warm blooming she hadn’t given herself permission to feel in years. She brushed a small kiss against Melody’s temple before easing herself free from the embrace.

  Melody stirred, not waking fully, just enough to let out a soft sound and tighten her hand around Jac’s wrist. “You sneaking out?” she whispered, voice thick with sleep.

  Jac smiled. “Work. And you’re too comfortable.”

  “You could stay,” Melody murmured. “Call in. Say you’re sick.”

  Jac laughed quietly. “Carl Ritter would personally drag me out of bed and into the precinct.”

  Melody smirked with her eyes still closed. “Be here tonight, then?”

  The question hung in the air, light but hopeful.

  Jac leaned down and kissed her — slow, tender, a promise. “I will.”

  Melody smiled against her mouth, content, and drifted back into sleep. Jac dressed quietly, slipping into her dress, tying her hair back, trying to keep her heels from tapping against the floor. She paused at the bedroom door, looked back once, and something warm flickered in her chest. Then she stepped out into the hallway, locking the door behind her.

  The streets were half-awake, half-frozen. A thin crust of frost covered the sidewalk. Jac breathed in deeply — the air crisp, the morning chilled enough to bite but not enough to sting. She felt almost lighthearted. She walked the twelve blocks home with a skip in her step, her head buzzing with the memory of Melody’s kiss, the warmth of her body, the promise of the night. She couldn’t remember the last time she’d felt truly rested or truly wanted.

  She reached her building, climbed the steps two at a time, and let herself in. The apartment greeted her with silence — not the comforting kind, but the familiar emptiness she’d known too well. She set her jacket on the chair, ran a hand through her hair, and noticed the answering machine blinking. She ignored it at first.

  Her uniform lay draped over the back of the small sofa — she gathered the shirt, brushed off lint, and swapped into it. Her hair needed redoing. Her mind was already turning toward the day ahead, the paperwork still left, the suspects gone, the strange quiet in the precinct after Ringer’s death. She reached for her boots — then remembered she’d left them by the front door.

  Crossing the living room, she passed the machine and tapped the button without thinking.

  The first message began to play, Melody’s voice soft and sweet. “Hey, just calling you back. Phone tag is getting old… Tag! You’re it!”

  Jac froze mid-step. That message was from three days ago.

  The next message chimed — her mother. Two days ago. “Honey, just wanted to hear from you. It’s been a few days. Call me back, okay?”

  Then another — yesterday.

  “Jacqueline, there was something on the news — some kind of fire downtown. I know you’re working these terrible hours, but please call me. I’m worried.”

  Jac inhaled slowly, guilt slipping in like cold air under a door, and stepped toward the machine.

  The final message began, left early that morning. “Jac, this is dispatch. We’re tying last night’s fire to your case. We couldn’t reach Bruce—“

  Bruce must have slept in too. Last night was one for the book. He deserved it, she thought to herself.

  “Call when you get this. The preliminary reports came back from last night — Fire started in the lab. A couple of tanks erupted—“

  She took a slow step toward the door — hesitant, listening to the message play.

  “No bodies were recovered in the rubble…”

  Jac stopped moving. Every muscle in her body tightened. No bodies recovered.

  Her breath left her all at once, a cold exhale that fogged the air in front of her. The words sank in, heavy and wrong. No bodies.

  She saw again the way the man in the lab had moved — jerking, twitching, dragging himself upright out of the flames. The way his eyes had looked past human. How bullets had sunk into him like nothing more than raindrops.

  Her hand trembled as she reached for the phone.

  A knock sounded at the door.

  Jac froze.

  Another knock. Harder. Faster. Urgent.

  She took one step to the door, cautiously, as fearful her body might fall through. Then the dispatch words clicked fully in her mind: “No bodies were recovered.”

  Jac’s eyes widened.

  She darted back toward the phone, reaching for the receiver— She needed to call them back. They needed to know.

  The deadbolt blasted across the apartment, slamming into the opposite wall like a bullet.

  Jac screamed.

  The chain ripped free next, clattering onto the linoleum. The entire door bowed inward, the frame splintering around it. Jac grabbed for her boots, snatched them up, yanked her pistol from its holster.

  The door exploded open, wood flying across the room in fractured splinters.

  A shape filled the doorway — smoking, half-charred, limping but powerful. The man from the lab. His clothes burned, his skin blistered and blackened, his eyes dead and bright all at once.

  Jac fired twice; center mass.

  He didn’t budge, didn’t even wince at the impacts.

  She turned and ran.

  Jac sprinted down the hallway toward her bedroom, her heart hammering against her ribs. Behind her, the thing crashed through what remained of her front door, its footsteps heavy—too heavy—each one shaking the thin apartment floorboards. She felt the tremor of them in her ankles.

  She didn’t look back. She reached her room, shoved the door closed behind her, and locked it—not because she believed it would hold, but because instinct demanded she do something. Anything. She crossed to the window in three strides and brought the butt of her gun down hard against the glass.

  The glass barely cracked.

  “Come on—!” She hit it again, harder.

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  The door behind her exploded inward.

  Jac didn’t think—she fired one shot through the cracked pane and then drove the heel of her boot into it. The window shattered outward in a glittering spray of shards. She lunged through the opening and onto the fire escape just as something massive collided with her bedroom wall.

  Her body hit the metal steps hard. Pain shot up her left side, but adrenaline swallowed it whole. She scrambled upright, boots half-tied, her shoulder burning where she’d scraped it on the brick as she tumbled through.

  She grabbed the fire escape ladder and yanked the release.

  The ladder shrieked as it dropped—

  The man—the thing—burst through her bedroom window in a roaring shower of bricks and wood. He landed on the fire escape with enough force to make it sway beneath Jac’s feet. Heat still bled off him. Smoke curled off his clothes like he was burning from the inside out.

  Jac didn’t wait. She threw herself down the ladder.

  It caught halfway. Jammed.

  “Come on—come on—!”

  She jumped, letting go, expecting a drop of six feet.

  Instead, she fell nearly ten.

  Snow cushioned her, but her ankle twisted underneath her, and she cried out. Pain flared white-hot. She rolled, swallowing the urge to scream, and clawed her way to her hands and knees.

  Above her, metal groaned. The thing was trying to force its body down the jammed ladder, snarling, ripping metal as it shoved itself through spaces too tight for anything human.

  Jac staggered upright, forced weight onto her injured ankle, and limped into a desperate run.

  Behind her, the fire escape shook violently—then a metallic shriek split the air as something heavy dropped from above. She didn’t turn around. She didn’t need to. She could feel it—could feel him—closing the distance, footfalls slamming into the snow-packed sidewalk like a sledgehammer.

  Her breath burned in her throat. She tasted blood. Cold air sliced down her lungs with every gasp.

  She wasn’t going to outrun him, but she didn’t need to outrun him. She only needed distance. Seconds. Inches.

  Ahead—at the corner—she saw the headlights of a city bus pulling up to the stop. Both doors opened, front and back, and a short line of commuters stepped forward, scarves pulled tight, unaware of the monster thundering across the street only half a block away.

  Jac pushed harder, ignoring the way each step felt like glass grinding through her ankle. She limped-sprinted, half-lurching, half-running, her breath ripping out in harsh clouds.

  Behind her—closer now—she heard the rhythm of the thing’s pursuit change. Faster. Hungrier.

  She chanced a glance: he was twenty feet back, maybe less, tearing across the snow like it wasn’t even there, like the cold didn’t exist, like pain meant nothing.

  His hand reached forward, closing the last yards between them.

  The bus hissed. The doors began to close.

  “STOP—! HOLD IT—!” Jac screamed.

  The driver didn’t hear her.

  She threw her body forward, lunging through the rear doors just as they began to fold shut around her. She felt the rubber edges skim her jacket. With one last burst of adrenaline, she shoved her boot between them and forced her way inside.

  The doors clamped shut behind her.

  She spun—

  The thing stood at the curb, inches away, slamming both hands against the metal. The bus rattled. Passengers screamed. The creature’s face contorted—rage and static and something broken behind the eyes—its mouth opening in a soundless snarl.

  And then—

  The doors sealed fully. The creature staggered back, clutching its head. It screamed—an awful metallic howl—as the bus lurched forward, pulling away from the curb.

  Jac collapsed into the nearest seat, lungs heaving, hands shaking so violently she had to press them against her knees to steady them. People stared at her—wide-eyed, whispering—but it all felt far away.

  Her ankle throbbed, throat burned, heart felt like it wanted to break out of her chest. But she was alive. Alive.

  She closed her eyes for a long moment, gripping the seat until her knuckles whitened.

  Bruce. She had to get to Bruce.

  The bus cut through the early morning streets, and Jac felt the tension coil tighter with every passing block. She knew the route by heart. Ten minutes. Maybe less. When the bus slowed at a familiar corner, she rose—still shaky—and pulled the cord.

  She stepped off into the cold wind, every shadow looking like something ready to surge forward. She limped the remaining blocks to Bruce’s house, each breath fogging the air in sharp bursts. Snow crunched under her boots.

  When she reached his porch, her hand trembled as she raised it to knock.

  The door opened almost immediately.

  Karen stood there—hair messy, eyes tired, sweater hanging loose over pajama pants. But her expression softened instantly when she saw Jac.

  “Jac? Sweetheart, what—what happened to you?”

  Jac didn’t even know where to start. Her lips parted, but the words jammed behind her teeth, tangled with fear and exhaustion and disbelief.

  Karen stepped back, gesturing her inside.

  “Come in, come in. God, you’re freezing. Bruce is just getting dressed—”

  Jac stepped through the doorway, relief loosening the tight coil in her chest.

  Behind Karen, the hallway light flickered.

  Jac turned.

  A silhouette stood in the doorway. Large, smoking, familiar. Smoking. Familiar.

  Karen’s eyes widened.

  “Bruce—?” she whimpered.

  The creature stepped fully inside.

  And before Jac could shout, before she could raise her gun, before Karen could move—

  A single hand wrapped around Karen’s head, twisting her neck with a sickening crack.

  Jac screamed.

  Jac didn’t remember drawing her gun. One moment she was screaming, the next she was firing—two sharp cracks exploding through the hallway.

  The bullets hit the creature square in the chest. Again, it didn’t flinch.

  Karen’s body slid off its arm and collapsed in a twisted heap at Jac’s feet, her hair falling over her face, eyes open but unseeing. Jac stumbled back, breath breaking, her stomach rising hot into her throat.

  “No—no—Karen—!” Bruce’s voice cracked as he barreled in from the bedroom, shirt half-tucked, belt hanging from one hand. He skidded to a stop, staring at the impossible shape in his foyer.

  Jac saw the moment Bruce realized what he was looking at. The grief on his face twisted, hardened, then shattered.

  “RUN!” Jac shouted.

  But the creature had already lunged.

  Bruce’s instincts kicked in—he grabbed Jac by the arm, pulling her sideways just as the creature’s hand slammed into the wall where her head had been. The drywall caved inward like soft clay. Debris exploded into the air.

  They stumbled backward down the hall, boots slipping on the hardwood.

  Jac fired again—once, twice, a third time. Each shot punched into the creature’s torso, small puffs of dark fabric tearing open. He absorbed them like raindrops.

  Bruce grabbed his service weapon from the console table by the hall and emptied it—six rounds in controlled groupings.

  Nothing stopped him; the rounds landing like water drops.

  “MOVE!” Bruce shoved Jac toward the kitchen. The creature jammed its hand into the wall again, tearing out a chunk of molding and plaster as it followed.

  Jac’s ankle screamed in protest, but fear pushed her forward, dragging her across the tile as Bruce yanked open the back door. Cold mid-morning light poured inside—bright, sharp, utterly out of place against the nightmare behind them.

  “GO!”

  Jac dove into the yard, boots slipping in the thin layer of frost. She caught herself on the railing of the back steps, barely keeping upright.

  Bruce followed—barely—because the creature slammed into him just as he cleared the doorframe, sending him stumbling. Bruce rolled with the impact, dodged left, and slammed the door shut.

  The wood bulged instantly under a heavy blow.

  Bruce didn’t wait to see if it would hold. “Car—now!” he barked.

  Jac didn’t argue. They ran—limping, slipping—across the patchy snow of the yard. Bruce fumbled his keys, cursed, caught them. Behind them the back door cracked once, twice, then exploded outward in a blast of splintered wood.

  “Faster!” he yelled.

  Jac pushed harder, chest aflame, ankle burning with every uneven step. She reached the passenger side just as Bruce hit the remote. The locks chirped open. She yanked the door wide.

  The thing launched itself off the back porch. It hit the yard with an impact that shook the fence. Jac scrambled into the passenger seat, slamming the door just as Bruce dove into the driver’s side.

  “BELT!” Bruce yelled.

  Jac yanked it across her shoulder as Bruce jammed the keys into the ignition. The engine coughed, then roared awake—and the creature hit the side of the car.

  Metal groaned violently. Jac screamed and covered her head as the passenger door warped inward, the window spider-cracking across her face.

  Bruce threw the car into reverse, tires screaming as they spun over ice. The creature dragged its fingers across the roof, the metal squealing under the weight.

  “BRUCE—GO!”

  He was already on it, navigating by muscle memory. The tires found traction, and the car shot backward out of the driveway. The creature lunged again, but Bruce jerked the wheel, clipping a trash bin that toppled and skidded across the street in its path.

  For a split second, the creature slowed.

  Bruce shifted violently into drive and floored it. The cruiser surged forward, fishtailing before straightening down the street, engine wailing like a wounded animal.

  Jac twisted in her seat, breath shaking, heart a frantic drum inside her chest.

  The creature stood in the center of the road, panting, smoke curling from its clothes, its head turning slightly as though listening to something she could not hear. Then it sprinted after them.

  “Jesus Christ,” Jac breathed, hands trembling, voice cracking under exhaustion and terror. “What is that thing?”

  Bruce didn’t answer. His jaw was clenched so tight a muscle jumped along his cheek. His eyes were wet, red, unfocused and razor-sharp at the same time.

  They blew through a stop sign, down another block, away from the house; from Karen’s body lying on the hardwood.

  Bruce forced a breath through his teeth. "We’re not going back,” he said quietly.

  “No,” Jac whispered, her throat tight. “We can’t.”

  The creature fell out of sight behind them—but neither of them looked relieved. Bruce hit the gas harder. They needed help, a plan, and distance.

  “Karen,” Bruce said, his voice raw, torn open.

  “Bruce, we need to think of something quick!”

  But Bruce wasn’t hearing it, his teeth gritting, his knuckles white, clinching the steering wheel. The cruiser barreled through the frozen streets with the monster behind them and no safe place left ahead.

  en streets with the monster behind them and no safe place left ahead.

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